Too short.
Understandable though since it's for the collab. But it sounds like a great intro! Something that I can see as an intro to a game or flash also. The heavy chord at the beginning is a very nice contrast to the light running of notes that follow it.
Great job! I'd like it if you could make this a full song. :3
-HFX ^_^
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Yeah, it really is too short, but I was trying to keep it within the time constraints. You can probably tell the ending part was really sudden cause I realized I had already gone over :P. I was definitely trying to make this stand out more dynamically and texturally, since it doesn't really have a melody to it heh - glad it worked, though :). Oh, and I'll check yours out right away - thanks for the review!
EXCELLENT!
Hahaha, I just had to put that in caps.
But really, I do think that! I was hoping to hear a song like this in the collab. One of these fast songs that jump about. Great! :D
Awesome job!
-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you please listen to my collab submission? http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/201029
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will do, and thanks for the compliment XD
Hmm.
This sounds more like an introduction. Although with only 0:34, there's only so much that you can fit into a song. Great job! If you could extend this into a full song, that would be awesome.
-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you please listen to my collab submission? http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/201029
Leave a review please! ^_^
Actually, I was considering extending it. The time limit had just occurred to me when I was composing even more, so I had to break it off and export for this collab. Then again, THIS was before the 40 sec limit had replaced 30secs.
Thanks!
Emotional indeed.
This is certainly emotional enough. It sounds great, and the strings are a nice touch. The only thing that sounds weird is that the piano seems to be panned off to the left a little. Makes the piece sound off balance?
Great job nonetheless.
-HFX ^_^
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Your right, I did pan the piano to the right. I have very little experience with mastering and was experimenting. The strings and piano together sounded a bit muddy to me, so I wanted to seperate them. Perhaps it was not the best idea, lol. :P
Thank you for the review! :D
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Pretty good.
I like the chords. Delicious sounding. :3 And very good for someone who doesn't play the piano.
The chord that comes in at 0:03 sounds weird there. Some discord going on. Maybe you should look into that.
Great job nonetheless.
-HFX ^_^
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*checks* Nah that's just a diminished F minor chord. (technically it's acceptable :3) I use 7ths a lot in my music. If I raised the top note from an E to an F it would be a standard F minor but since the top note was E in the first bar I thought it sounded cool how it flowed. I like it better this way :P
Thanks for the review, and sure I'll leave you one too.
Definitely soothing, yet sad.
It does have a taint of sadness. It's slow and calm, yet has the feel of some sort of recent loss. Well composed. The looping is also very good, and it fits well.
Wonderful job!
-HFX ^_^
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Full song!
Even if it does make it in, you should make this a full song. :3 I'd like to see what you can come up with.
It certainly can use some more work. The mastering needs to be changed a bit too.
What did you use for your piano? FL Keys?
-HFX ^_^
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Yup, I'm making it into a full song. I'm going to fix the mechanical side, and actually do some mixing and stuff when I get somewhere with it. And for my piano I use the Steinberg Piano soundfont... I'll pm you with a link.
I'll definitely check out your song, and thanks for the review!
Ooh nice. :3
I like this. It fits well inside the collab. It has a nice feel to it, a wonderful ambient type of feel while not being too ambiently boring.
Great job!
-HFX ^_^
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Heehee.
Good song. It has a nice feel to it. Somewhat like a haunted house feel. That's what I get. I like it a lot. Although the piano has a somewhat harpsichord-al sound to it. That's probably what also contributes to the haunted house feel. Also adds a lot to the collab. I like.
Great job!
-HFX ^_^
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Dinnertime.
I was just checking out the submissions for the collab.
This is a nice song indeed. The use of notes along with the slow harmony makes a nice relaxing song. It sounds like something that I would have playing while eating a nice candlelight dinner. Really soothing.
Good job.
-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you please listen to my collab submission? http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/201029
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