Phyrnna's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[KgZ} Piano Collab "A minor"]

Dinnertime.

I was just checking out the submissions for the collab.
This is a nice song indeed. The use of notes along with the slow harmony makes a nice relaxing song. It sounds like something that I would have playing while eating a nice candlelight dinner. Really soothing.
Good job.

-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you please listen to my collab submission? http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/201029
Leave a review please! ^_^

[The Flood (demo)]

Really nice.

Nice submission. It's nice, quiet, and sounds like it would fit into an emotional scene of a movie. I'd certainly love to hear the completed version of this song. It'll probably be very lovely.

-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you please listen to my collab submission? http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/201029
Leave a review please! ^_^

Tamadrum responds:

I'll check that out now... :)

[Flash-MX(AminCollab)]

Nice. :D

I participated in the collab too, so I went around to listen to the submissions.
I like what you have here. It's nice and short, and the transitions are nice.
Great job!

-HFX ^_^
P.S. Could you listen to my submission for the collab? http://www.newgrounds.com/ audio/listen/201029
And maybe leave a review?

[[LK] Lost (WiP)]

Certainly an improvement.

The song is certainly an improvement from the last time I checked on your songs. It's nice to see that you're making good progress.
Let's see. It's a nice tune. The main problem I have with the song is the piano. The guitar also sounds weird, but to me my focus is the piano. It is similar to a piano, but it's way too synthesized to sound acoustic. I'd recommend using a different VSTi.
I'd like to hear the finished product.

-HFX ^_^

LK412 responds:

Thanks for the review and the compliment. Could you recommend any VSti's? That would be awesome. Also the guitar does the melopdy sound wierd or the sound of it? Im not sure about both. Thanks for the review again.

[Traverse the Woods(Orch Remix)]

Thank you!

Oh my gosh this sounds great! :D I thank you so much for making this remix!
The only thing I have against this is the "bassline" that starts off the song. It sounds weird at first. Of course, it fits later on.
Thanks very much! Of course, if you ever want the .flp for my songs to remix, just ask me and I'll send them over.

-HFX ^_^

[Winter Aftermath~]

Uwahh!

I like your classical songs! Well... I'm a sucker for classical. >_>;
But yeah, that made sense. :P I can see that certainly.
And.... UWAAAHHH!!!! EastWest does certainly sound so great!! >_<
Oh well... I've currently got... 47 days remaining til my downlo..... *cough* PURCHASE... finishes.
Make more classical! :D

-HFX ^_^

[Solitude~]

Oooh! :D

I really like this. :D It's got a great melody and everything. :D
It's not perfect though....
First off, the piano does need a little better equalizing. It sounds a bit too bright at some points... and the echo really rings.
The part from 0:38 to 0:47 is really nice. I like that touch. The only thing is that I would think that you should ameliorate it a little more and add more notes so that it runs faster.
Overall, a great song. A little more work is needed though. But big kudo's to you for making such a great piano song. (Hahaha accordian! XD)
I might want to try remaking this song. :3

-HFX ^_^

PowersWithin responds:

Yay thnx for ur CC :D Yeah I gotta work on my mastering hehe. Let me know if you need the FL file for this =P

[X.-Free Flying-.]

Definitely a great dance theme.

I'll give this one a 9. :3 I really like it, and it sounds rather fitting to the title. The one thing that I can suggest for improvement is the piano. I think it's a little too bright/heavy from 0:51 to 1:16. Make it a little lighter, and also perhaps have the sound sustain for longer by having the notes hold out as long as it can before the next one comes.
But other than that small thing, I really like the way this song was done. Great job! I'll go download this.

-HFX ^_^

[Dj Clayface - OutThereSomewere]

Not bad, yet still incomplete.

In my opinion that is. :P I think you could definitely add more to the song. Perhaps it might be that you don't have enough effects in there? I'm certain that if you manipulated the effects around more with the automation clips, that you'd come out with a better song. Still, it's very good the way it is. :D
Keep it up.

-HFX ^_^