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Rather repetitive. The only reason I can imagine it to sound like "Shaolin" is the drums in the background. But even still, all it really is is a repetitive hip hop beat. Maybe... add some more instruments. Maybe even some.... Asian instruments? Might work better that way.
-HFX ^_^
Hahaha.
This is pretty good for hardstyle actually. Although I must say, you're better at the progressive trance. But maybe if you did some more hardstyle you'll get better at it! :D
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Thanks! I've already got a new melody for a Progressive Trance song, so look forward to that!
Nexus.
This little piece itself is not very good. The only real variation throughout it were the drums until near the end where it actually has some energy. Now if you took that last part and massively expanded on that, then you'll have a great song. As of right now, it's only decent. Keep up with it!
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Thanks for the review, yeah this song isnt really 100% complete. I'll expand on it more, I guess this is just a little preview.
Stealing out your first review.
Great song. It's nice and hip, and something that makes me feel like I'm walking on clouds. :D
Kind of reminds me of that Jim Carrey "Yes Man" poster that's been around. XD
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Mmm. Needs work.
It's alright. Needs work.
One of your synths that come in at 0:07, the one that sounds like a Space Invader laser sound and comes at the beginning of each measure. It's a little weird. And also... it's a little weak and combined with the fact that it's panned off to the left entirely, it's not very good. Kind of annoying after a while. I suppose best to pan it between left and right, and also perhaps play with it a little more.
The beat is alright. It's a bit messy though at some points and feels rather muddy.
The song itself is repetitive... so you may want to add more variation or another theme. Another thing is that you should also work on the mastering. That certainly needs to be played about a bit more.
Keep working at it.
-HFX ^_^
I thank thee for thine constructive and encouraging words. I shall definately make a v2, so I'll take it into consideration. :)
Edit: The panning is to the left and right btw, I don't know what you mean by that. :p
Admirable
I've always enjoyed your orchestral pieces. This one is no exception.
Let's see. The part from 0:07 to 0:13. I think that the last two or three seconds could have more build in dynamics. This can then be kept high until the piano chords at 0:19 to 0:20 release the tension and let the dynamics drop back down for the six second portion of 0:21 to 0:27. And then the build from 0:28 to 0:31 was pretty nice. The part from 0:39 to 0:42 is well done. Great climb and then release afterwards.
Mostly the song is great as it is. It loops well and works for the battle theme that you're writing it for. Having played Sonny, I think this will work well. I only think that there could be more dynamics in those sections I mentioned. Well... not so much as in more volume, but a wider RANGE of dynamics. Either way, the song is very good.
Great job! I'd love to hear more from you in the future!
-HFX ^_^
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Repetitive....
Yeah, I'd say it's a little on the repetitive side. More variation to the theme would do the song much good.
The piano came in nicely... although too simple. I think if you added a left hand harmony to accompany that it would be just fine. Perhaps two note chords would fit this song.
Overall, the song has a rather upbeat feel to it. It's nice, and I like it.
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No reviews yet?
Well, about time I reviewed this. I've been busy. :P
The song is pretty nice. Nice structure and nice melodic line. Particularly I like your intro. That is nice. The lead synth that you used there is good.
The lead synth that comes in at 0:44 isn't so nice though.... it's rather ick. Especially when it's trying to play out multiple of the same note, it mashes them up together in a not so clear fashion.
Good song still.
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Title fits.
Well... it's repetitive. Need I say more? :P
At least the guitars sound better in this one than the last one.
Keep trying.
-HFX ^_^
Still pretty new to FL Studio, getting better (At least -I- think so) by the day. Keep checking in, I'll be putting new stuff up every now and then. Thanks for the review!
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