Ooh wonderful!
I guess I have heard better things on top 30. But of the things that have appeared on top 30, this is definitely worth a spot there. ^_^
It lacks a bit of melody, except near the end. But it's alright. I think your other songs are way better.
And what's wrong with arpeggios? I love them.
Anyways, keep up the good work!
-HFX ^_^
Thanks! Well yes honestly i think the same, doesn't REALLY deserve it's spot =P Yeah maybe it lacks a melody, i just figured this to be pure club/trance song, im thinking of making it longer, like 7 mins or something just for fun! And no arp's are good! It's just kinda lazy to use preset ones that's what i'm saying x)
THanks for the review! Glad you liked it =D!
Oriental?
It's a nice concept that you have. The song so far is far from complete, and hence I'm rating it that way.
The only thing I have to say is that... this isn't quite Oriental perse. Oriental tends to mean the eastern Asian countries. This actually sounds more Indian than Oriental. Mainly I think it's because you used a Sitar for your instrument and your beat is similar to Indian beats. Oriental sounds would use something around a Koto or a string instrument, and have half steps here and there.
Not a bad concept, but could use a lot of work.
-HFX ^_^
Pretty good.
I would say that this song is overwhelmingly Nate's style out of all of the others. There is a hint of B0UNC3 in there also. I suppose it is the way you did the main melody that makes it sound that way.
The song is really well done. It keeps a fast pace without letting it up.
Another thing, I've read most of the previous reviews before writing this. I would have to agree that perhaps this isn't the most professionally mastered piece submitted on Newgrounds, yet it still has its merits as a song in and of itself. I don't know too much about mastering myself, but perhaps if you did consider some of the suggestions and did a remastered version of this, I am sure it would turn out even better. I can certainly imagine improvement on top of this, and I am certainly sure that you are capable of improving on it.
In any case, keep up the good work!
-HFX ^_^
I am capable of improving, and I will! ^.~
Thanks for the review, waaaay better review than all those bad low score reviews ^^
Thank you!
Excellent for a Dance performance!
I can really imagine this as being excellent for a dance group performance. The song carries a good rhythm and energy to it.
The intro to the song makes for an good entrance scene for the dancers to come in. The section that goes from 0:46 to 1:00 makes for a good interlude between intense dance sequences and is a slight relief to the high energy. The part that I liked was 1:41 to 1:55, where there is a good dramatic pause.
This is a wonderful song overall. Great job and well done!
-HFX ^_^
My favorite out of yours so far!
Hahaha! I can definitely hear the techno in it. It could have been made into a techno song certainly, but I think the way it turned out is wonderful! It has good energy and keeps its pace very well. I think the techno backlay for it was very good for the song over all.
A wonderfully done song and I really really loved listening to this one!
This one earned itself a download and you a place on my favorite artists list.
-HFX ^_^
Thank you! I always appreciate a positive review. Lol, I now have four users who have me as one of their favorites... :/. I need to start collecting more fans.
I hear a song.
Improvisation is good. And what you have here is a very good sample of that. Though I think this can be made into a good song. Just take the parts that stand out from improvisation and make those into a song.
Hmm... maybe if I have time, I'll see if I can make a coherent song out of this improvisation you have here. I can definitely hear a song out of it. It's like a block of marble that is half carved into a statue roughly, and all it needs is the right vision and carving to bring it all out.
-HFX ^_^
Yea, that's actually exactly what I was thinking... Right now the song is VERY rough (mostly due to my utter lack of piano skills), but I might make it into an actual charted-out song if inspiration ever hits... Btw, feel free to mess around with this improv. I'd be very interested to hear what you could turn this into.
~Sycross
A wonderful song.
BlazingDragon has deprived me of much to really critique without sounding repetitive. But yes, I would say improve on the things that he noted and the song would be even better than it already is. The only thing I guess I could add is that maybe add a bridge, and also maybe make the ending not so.............. simple?
Great job nonetheless. Keep it up!
-HFX ^_^
Yes, BlazingDragon's reviews are always amazingly helpful. I appreciate your additional comments, though, and I may edit this in the future. Glad you liked it!
~Sycross
Very good except for the vocals.
I really liked this song and the music part of it. The lyrics are very beautiful and the music fits very well.
The only critique I have about this is the vocals. In my honest opinion, it could have been done better. At certain times the microphone seemed to not handle the volume very well. I have that problem too so I understand the frustration.
The other critique I have is with your voice itself. Partially it's the song itself, since the song has such a big range for the melody. That probably made it really hard for you to sing. It sounds as if you strained your voice to sing it. I guess the only way to work around that is to practice singing.
Great job nonetheless. I look forward to more from you.
-HFX ^_^
Thanks! Yea, some parts of this song are definitely a little high for me to sing... and I didnt have much time to record this, so it was kind of rushed... I'm going to try to rerecord it by Friday, but I doubt that's going to happen.
I appreciate your comments.
~Sycross
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