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Phyrnna

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Simple.

The feeling that I get from this isn't quite a "sky" feeling. It's nice and simple though.
I like listening to people's first submissions, it's fun to hear what they sounded from "way back". :P

-HFX ^_^

Wonderful! I'm Dancing!

Okay, that was a bad play on the title. But really, this is a great remix of the original. It's quite enjoyable to the ears. At first when I heard it from 0:13 to 0:26 and heard the bass not changing I thought "Oh my gosh he has no sense of chords." but it turned out to be a great way to lead into it. :D
Great job!

-HFX ^_^

Kazmo responds:

Yay! You're Dancing! :P

Aahhah I love how you thought I had no sense of chords for 26 seconds...funnyyyy. ;]

Thanks for the review!!!

Really touching.

You have a wonderful melodic line and a good base for it. Although it certainly needs more work.
For one, it's much too short. I see three sections in this song: Orchestrated first, piano middle, and a violin dominated end. Each of these sections could be expanded to a minute each at least.
I like how the piano is crisp and simple. The transition out of it from 0:51 and 0:54 could be improved though. The snares are fine, yet the piano run would probably sound better if you applied an accelerando to the last second at 0:54.
On the whole, this song is nice, but needs work.

-HFX ^_^

XenoxX responds:

I Agree very much lol. Since I wasn't really you know like motivated to make it I was just bored so I expected more reviews like this one. So thanks for being honest. and of course Thanks for the review!

XenoxX!

Very good, yet could be better.

I definitely noticed that writer's block in the last minute or so.. The first part of the song was very good, and sounded like Chaoz Fantasy plus a good dose of good Envy's taste. It held the lovely tone that I loved in your songs Imagination and Heaven Road. However the last minute or so sounded a little dull compared to what came before it. Very good nonetheless, don't get me wrong. It's very well done indeed.
Great job!

-HFX ^_^

Envy responds:

yeah i struggled alot on the end, didn't know what to do. I figure it came out alright for having zero ideas XD.

It COULD be better, but I just wanted to get this finished or i feared I'd just stop working on it like Jump or some of my other previews that I've pretty much lost.

Thanks for the review

~Envy

Finally.

Wonderful. Even if this is not the final final product, it sounds great the way it is. :D
I read over Kazmo's review, and I could agree on those points. Although I myself am not quite as good at picking out certain specific details.
Keep it up! It's wonderful work, and I'm sure it can get that perfect 10 from me too!
:D

-HFX ^_^

Krussi responds:

Thanks for another review :P yeah, i noticed that when i read Kazm0's review, guess I was to tired and had been working on it to much so I didn't hear it before I got the review ^^

Thanks for for time, the reivew and the "9" ^^

Nice calming song.

It's a really nice calming song that's nicely orchestrated.
The only thing I could complain about is it's lack of length.
Maybe expand on it a bit more?
Keep it up!

-HFX ^_^

Ah, it's very enjoyable.

Maybe the piano isn't the best, but that's not what that matters. It's an enjoyable song, and it's fun to listen to!
Good job. ^_^

-HFX ^_^

mateya responds:

thx glad u like it :)

Umm....

I could understand trying to remix it using recorded. However... this just gets a bit annoying. Sorry. Repeating the first line a dozen times and then this weird voice editing for the majority of the song afterwards just doesn't make a good song.

-HFX

Wow, this is certainly high energy!

The melody is nice and it keeps a really fast pace that is wonderful!
Great song!

-HFX ^_^

Teck071 responds:

Thank you! Sweet as

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