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Not bad.

It's pretty good. The guitars sound decent, although I think it could sound better. Unfortunately I'm not experienced with that so I can't exactly tell you how though.
I like to see you finish the song. Vocals could be nice for the song, but it's pretty good as is.

-HFX ^_^

Great great party!

Now this is definitely better! I'm glad you finished it! It's definitely something I can imagine at a house party.
Wonderful job.

-HFX ^_^

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks!

Hause? :P

Interesting name. I wonder where you got it. XD
Either way, the song isn't bad at all. Although it's not quite as good as your other songs, and gets a little repetitive. But then I'm not too familiar with the genre of House in general.
I think you should complete this. It'll be great.

-HFX ^_^

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks!

Great song and great use of effects!

This is a nice song! I personally think that you could have expanded on the theme a little more. But overall a great job!

-HFX ^_^

Mmm... needs some work.

Pretty good for the second week of FL though. But the lead synth gets a little annoying. I think maybe mix it a little differently?
Great job nonetheless.
Keep it up!

-HFX ^_^

KingKilo responds:

Thanks ma'am :D
I'll be sure to put in more different things, in my next song.
I appreciate the comment.

-KKB

Wow, this is wonderful!

I particularly liked your use of the "boing" synth at 0:49. Adds a little spring to your song indeed.

-HFX ^_^

EnkoreDJ responds:

yep :D

I like the melody in this one!

Really, the melody that you had come in was really really nice!
I really enjoyed listening to this song, really!
Wait... that was four really's... in one review.
:P

-HFX ^_^

heartless1298 responds:

Lol, Thanks!

Yay!

Great song!
I can only say that maybe the kick needs to be higher.
Also the piano.... did you use FL Keys? They sound rather... flat. I think maybe you need to add some effects to it, and maybe use a soundfont?
Great job nonetheless.

-HFX ^_^

Great job!

You did a wonderful job of fitting the melody into the 4/4 and the 6/8. For those who aren't theory-oriented in their listening, it probably would sound very natural. I actually listened out for it, so I could hear the difference between the two halves. Still, you did a very excellent job of fitting them together. Although the song it self seems to fit more naturally with 4/4. In 6/8 it's jiving with the rhythm, yet at the same time also stylishly going off beat. :P
Wonderful job!

-HFX ^_^

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