Phyrnna's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{Insomnia}]

Mmm... needs work.

The intro actually isn't bad at all. Especially that first second. The problem is that at 0:43 it doesn't have as much energy as the lead-in snares would imply. The intro can be kept as is. But I think everything after needs more energy.
Then the silence from 1:19 to 1:35 should probably be removed. It's nice that you dimmed the volume a bit prior to that, but I think that it should go from the dimmed part at 1:18 straight to the part at 1:35. It would make the song sound much better and more cohesive.
I like how at 2:55 it starts to pick up the beat and get faster. I wish you could have expanded on that a little more before leading to the outro at 3:12.
Give it more work, and it'll turn out great!

-HFX ^_^

P.S. If you're interested, could you also please listen and review my songs as well? Thank you! ^.^

[Raver's Fantasy O-H deluxe O-H]

It's pretty nice but...

It's not a bad remix. However there are a few things that need working on.
Namely the bass certain needs a compressor of some sort to keep it down. The same goes for the claps that are a bit too loud especially near the end.
Keep working on it.

-HFX ^_^

newrounds1 responds:

I see lol i wish i could keep working on it xD but i only got the demo of FL.. im so lazy never downloading the full version x)

[Kazmo - Theory]

Wow. :D

This is another amazing work by you.
Let's see.... commentary. Well, the lead synth for the first minute and half or so could be worked on a bit. It's.... a bit too bold? Maybe. I like my coffee light anyways. :P
I like your use of the firetruck siren at 3:08. Makes me think there's an emergency case of AWESOME coming right after. Which was correct. The drum run at 3:35 was great! The kick afterwards really stood out and I liked it.
The snare machine gun at 4:35 could have been done without.
Overall, great great great!

-HFX ^_^

Kazmo responds:

I don't drink coffee much, but I like mine dark! :]

Ahahah that firetruck siren is in fact the lead just pitch-bent upwards, soooo ya, it is pretty AWESOME.

YAY SNARE MACHINEGUN!!! Sorry, I couldn't help it, I had to put it in there...I dunno whyz.

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a review! :D

[{UTI}-A TaPlace [loop]]

Owie?

It's okay.... need to tone it down a bit. The lead synth gets a little annoying and painful at times.
>_<

-HFX >_<

[Alone... again]

My condolences....

.... however I don't think this should be played at the ceremony.
Of course, that is all dependent on who your father was and what he's remembered for. However, I don't think the drum beat is suitable for this sort of song. Something more Ambient would be better.
Then again, you're the one to make the final decision.
I would say however, use a better title.

-HFX

JPLaro responds:

My father used to rock the world
therefore
this is perfect

[Kazmo - Armed [Trance Loop]]

...and loaded with AWESOME!

Okay... that was kind of a lame title. >_>; Just being random.

I can certainly hear this in a flash. Chords are wonderful, but you know that already. :P 8 because it's not as good as your others, and because you're awesome like that. :P But 5/5 still. ;)
Great job. Wait... didn't I already tell you that?

-HFX ^_~

Kazmo responds:

Pft, that's not a lame title, for it's loaded with AWESOME!

Thanks, you're awesome too. :]

Ahaah you can say good job as many times as you want, I don't mind. ^-^

Thanks again for the review!

[Walking in the air (Loop)]

Nice loop.

This is a nice loop of the original song. Although, I would like to hear you make an entire remix of this song. I think you'll do a great job on it if you did.

-HFX ^_^

Krussi responds:

Thanks for the advice :P I intended to do a full remix, but I got lazy and made it a loop. I'll start on the full remix tomorrow, but I dont know if I should make it in this style or a trance remix :/ Speaking of remix, I saw the GD Remix of "Journey" :D It was rather cool :D I also had in mind of asking for your permission to remix it, but I want to wait until my skills improve so I can do a remix worthy the title "Journey Remix" :P

Thanks for the review, the advice and the "8" :D

[Fading Footprints]

Ooh! I like this!

It has a nice walking pace that makes this a nice song to listen to. I also like the piano melody that you used here.
Only thing I would say for you to improve it is when you start the melody again at 1:17, maybe instead of using chords in the harmony you could use gentle arpeggios. I think it would add a nice touch to it.

-HFX ^_^

Krussi responds:

Thanks for the review Melody ^^

Great idea you got there :P Got to many projects to work on atm though, so it'll probably take some time before I start on this one again :P
Thanks for your time, review and the "8" :D

[Mcewthom & EQ - Ocean Dreams]

Wonderful and amazing.

This song is just amazing. I wasn't so much a fan of your other songs, since I don't find my tastes in music about others. However, what you like is what you like. But this song, is also what I like. It's wonderful, and definitely is getting a download from me. You certainly have the potential to be a great artist here on Newgrounds.
Keep it up, you'll make it to the top here.

-HFX ^_^

[DJ Kazmo - Falling Skies]

Simple.

The feeling that I get from this isn't quite a "sky" feeling. It's nice and simple though.
I like listening to people's first submissions, it's fun to hear what they sounded from "way back". :P

-HFX ^_^