Work a little more on it.
The melody is certainly catchy. Yet I think you need to remaster it some more so that you can bring out the organ more. And also subdue certain parts of the organ so that it won't burst our eardrums when you bring it out.
Keep working on it.
-HFX ^_^
which one's are you talking about? there's a piano, bass, drums, and organ.
Mmm... needs work.
The intro actually isn't bad at all. Especially that first second. The problem is that at 0:43 it doesn't have as much energy as the lead-in snares would imply. The intro can be kept as is. But I think everything after needs more energy.
Then the silence from 1:19 to 1:35 should probably be removed. It's nice that you dimmed the volume a bit prior to that, but I think that it should go from the dimmed part at 1:18 straight to the part at 1:35. It would make the song sound much better and more cohesive.
I like how at 2:55 it starts to pick up the beat and get faster. I wish you could have expanded on that a little more before leading to the outro at 3:12.
Give it more work, and it'll turn out great!
-HFX ^_^
P.S. If you're interested, could you also please listen and review my songs as well? Thank you! ^.^
It's pretty nice but...
It's not a bad remix. However there are a few things that need working on.
Namely the bass certain needs a compressor of some sort to keep it down. The same goes for the claps that are a bit too loud especially near the end.
Keep working on it.
-HFX ^_^
I see lol i wish i could keep working on it xD but i only got the demo of FL.. im so lazy never downloading the full version x)
Wow. :D
This is another amazing work by you.
Let's see.... commentary. Well, the lead synth for the first minute and half or so could be worked on a bit. It's.... a bit too bold? Maybe. I like my coffee light anyways. :P
I like your use of the firetruck siren at 3:08. Makes me think there's an emergency case of AWESOME coming right after. Which was correct. The drum run at 3:35 was great! The kick afterwards really stood out and I liked it.
The snare machine gun at 4:35 could have been done without.
Overall, great great great!
-HFX ^_^
I don't drink coffee much, but I like mine dark! :]
Ahahah that firetruck siren is in fact the lead just pitch-bent upwards, soooo ya, it is pretty AWESOME.
YAY SNARE MACHINEGUN!!! Sorry, I couldn't help it, I had to put it in there...I dunno whyz.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a review! :D
Owie?
It's okay.... need to tone it down a bit. The lead synth gets a little annoying and painful at times.
>_<
-HFX >_<
My condolences....
.... however I don't think this should be played at the ceremony.
Of course, that is all dependent on who your father was and what he's remembered for. However, I don't think the drum beat is suitable for this sort of song. Something more Ambient would be better.
Then again, you're the one to make the final decision.
I would say however, use a better title.
-HFX
My father used to rock the world
therefore
this is perfect
...and loaded with AWESOME!
Okay... that was kind of a lame title. >_>; Just being random.
I can certainly hear this in a flash. Chords are wonderful, but you know that already. :P 8 because it's not as good as your others, and because you're awesome like that. :P But 5/5 still. ;)
Great job. Wait... didn't I already tell you that?
-HFX ^_~
Pft, that's not a lame title, for it's loaded with AWESOME!
Thanks, you're awesome too. :]
Ahaah you can say good job as many times as you want, I don't mind. ^-^
Thanks again for the review!
Nice loop.
This is a nice loop of the original song. Although, I would like to hear you make an entire remix of this song. I think you'll do a great job on it if you did.
-HFX ^_^
Thanks for the advice :P I intended to do a full remix, but I got lazy and made it a loop. I'll start on the full remix tomorrow, but I dont know if I should make it in this style or a trance remix :/ Speaking of remix, I saw the GD Remix of "Journey" :D It was rather cool :D I also had in mind of asking for your permission to remix it, but I want to wait until my skills improve so I can do a remix worthy the title "Journey Remix" :P
Thanks for the review, the advice and the "8" :D
Ooh! I like this!
It has a nice walking pace that makes this a nice song to listen to. I also like the piano melody that you used here.
Only thing I would say for you to improve it is when you start the melody again at 1:17, maybe instead of using chords in the harmony you could use gentle arpeggios. I think it would add a nice touch to it.
-HFX ^_^
Thanks for the review Melody ^^
Great idea you got there :P Got to many projects to work on atm though, so it'll probably take some time before I start on this one again :P
Thanks for your time, review and the "8" :D
Wonderful and amazing.
This song is just amazing. I wasn't so much a fan of your other songs, since I don't find my tastes in music about others. However, what you like is what you like. But this song, is also what I like. It's wonderful, and definitely is getting a download from me. You certainly have the potential to be a great artist here on Newgrounds.
Keep it up, you'll make it to the top here.
-HFX ^_^
What's my motto? Turning Dreams into Reality. That's my motto.
Age 36, Female
Dreaming Musician
Flying Above the Clouds
Joined on 3/20/08
Bass Plano Blues/Strom 
