I'd say for an intro theme for a game, this is quite excellent. I like it. :)
The only problem I have with it is the mixing. The way you have certain instruments panned all the way to the left or the right sounds kind of awkward.
I'm looking forward to seeing this game!
~Phyrnna ^_^ <3
Why, thanks for the heads up! I'll do something about the panning âEU" I'll need to DM you and ask one or two questions, because I don't yet know how to pan audio without it sounding very "heavy".
Also, thanks for the review in general. I hope we won't disappoint! I know Bullet Heaven was one of our inspirations, but I do hope we deliver. xx
I like it, I'm jammin' to it. :3
It's actually a nice piece. Aside from various improvements to sound quality, the one main improvement to this song that I'd suggest is adding a bass instrument (one lower than the one you already have) that plays only the tonic notes of your chords. That would definitely strengthen your song and add a strong support to everything else.
Otherwise, it's great! Keep it up!
~Phyrnna ^_^ <3
Top 5 again! Congrats!
As usual, your sounds are professional quality. You should be selling albums already. :P
I think you should try to find a singer to work with. Your songs are excellent, but I think that if you had vocals they would be much better too. Just food for thought though. :P
I've been getting your MSN messages, I just haven't been on much. I apologize, I'll try to catch you on there again. ^__^
Great job! I wish you the best!
Love,
Phyrnna ^_^ <3
Well done!
I like this song and its composition. I don't know if I would use this for an epic boss fight myself, however it definitely sounds like an epic theme for an RPG.
I like its composition and I think its decently well written. The problem with it is the sound. It needs work on the mixing side, and also on the mastering side.
However I certainly liked this enough that I chose to download it and remaster it myself. So if you want it, just email me about it or PM me.
Keep up the good work!
~Phyrnna ^_^
Wow, I'm speechless. And yes, I'll definitely be requesting that remastering! It's a real priceless joy to have an actual AP celeb reply to my "greets"! :-D
Very good song.
I really like this song. I'll start off with that. :D
I love how the intro starts, it's nice and slow. It has a very good ambient feel to it.
The second part of the song isn't as good as the first part though. In my opinion that is. It sounds pretty much just like the first part, and the new additions to it don't really add much. The outro works well.
I suppose the middle can be changed up a bit.
Great job nonetheless!
~Phyrnna ^_^
Excellent piece!
Listen to this piece kind of makes me miss writing out full pieces. I've spent a little too long writing loops for video games. xD I love this song and it's what compelled me to favorite you as an artist. Well, about time I took some time out to review it.
In any case... the critique.
Structure-wise, the song is relatively simple and short. However I do enjoy how it goes through thematic development in the short span that it has. The break at 0:42 is sort of abrupt and leaves the listener hanging after such an epic motif. While its discomforting (to me at least xD), it works effectively. The piano part afterwards works well as a break from the epic theme. I personally love an excellent piano part. While the piano part does accomplish its job, it could certainly use some development when it repeats itself as the other instruments return. Also, at around 1:00, some soft timpani rolls may also help with the atmosphere.
And now that I mention it, I have to critique you on it. Your percussion is something I think could be changed. The song sounds excellent as is, however when it comes to an "epic" or "heroic" piece, percussion has been an essential element in most compositions. Even the smallest amount (such as quiet timpani rolls) help. DavidOrr, MaestroRage, Hans Zimmer, and other famous artists for "epic" music make prolific use of percussive instruments. And if you listen to each artist's discography, it is also the use of these percussive instruments that defines their music from the others. Zimmer loves the tambourine, and uses it religiously (and to a fault in my opinion). I suppose you should try having a section where the timpani can stand out for a bit (take the limelight). Also adding a more treble based percussive instrument can help with the pace of the music (e.g. tambourines in Zimmer's music and snares in Orr's music).
Now outside of that, I think your composition of the song is excellent. The next part of critique is one where many (including myself) need work on. The sound. Focusing on composition comes a long way in making a song sound excellent, however knowing how to record (which most of us don't need to worry about) and mix the many sounds of the instruments can make a song sound much better. While orchestral pieces (and more classical orchestral pieces) usually mix themselves just by composition, adding EQ to help place the frequencies and using compression to bring out certain aspects help create that "epic" sound. Your song is "epic" already, however I think if you mixed it better it can stand out more.
Nonetheless, I believe that composition is more important than mixing and that you have nailed well.
Great work on this song! I already have it on my Ipod. :P
I look forward to hearing more from you. ^__^
~Phyrnna ^_^
Thanks for such a lengthy and in-depth review! I really appreciate it!
Lets see if I can address these issues in order...
The piano: I wrote this just for NG, so I had to have a piano interlude! ^_^ I agree with your repetition comment though. I didn't spend as much time as I should have developing the piano, and it shows. :-\
The percussion: This is probably the weakest part of the piece. PhilVille commented on it earlier, and I totally agree with you. Timpani rolls would definitely help around 1:00, and I should have put more effort into some pulse-pounding drums. Actually, I added the percussion section last. I was debating releasing the piece entirely without percussion, and I suppose in my indecision I might have gone halfsies instead of ALL OR NOTHING! Ah well, I'll correct this in future work, just for you!
The mix is, of course, something everyone could use help on, and I am no exception. I think this may be my best (certainly hardest, given the number of contrasting melodic lines) job so far in the mixing arena, but I still have a long way to go.
Thanks again for the return review! I appreciate the criticism, especially from someone such as yourself. And having this song on your ipod is the best compliment I've got from someone in a while!
Oh, and If you ever want to collab or anything, send me a pm!
Take care!
-TheB
A good cover, but could certainly be improved upon
I actually really like the orchestration of your version. I've loved the original ever since I heard this, so hearing this version definitely appeals to me. However I do believe that it can be improved upon a lot.
For one, the mixing is quite scrappy, and a lot more can be done to make the sounds work together better. The drums sound quite out of place to me when they come in. They're quite repetitive, and they don't sound quite like how the other instruments do.
Nonetheless, and excellent version of the classic. Great job, and I hope you continue to make more songs!
~Phyrnna ^_^
Yeah, I hear you. Thats one of my biggest goals as of right now. As soon as I learn to master my music some more I will definately update this piece and add more to it. I made another version of this that I think you may like alot more, its called, "Zelda: Eye of the Storm". Check it out, im sure you'll find it very adventurous and enjoyable. Thanks for the honesty.
Well done.
Well, not sure if you even read your reviews. But if you do, well here's to you!
You probably know that I've been following you since... forever. :P Been a supporter and believer of you even after all that fell out. You definitely have the talent in you. Keep up the good work! You'll make it big!
~Phyrnna ^_^
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