Nexus.
This little piece itself is not very good. The only real variation throughout it were the drums until near the end where it actually has some energy. Now if you took that last part and massively expanded on that, then you'll have a great song. As of right now, it's only decent. Keep up with it!
-HFX ^_^
Thanks for the review, yeah this song isnt really 100% complete. I'll expand on it more, I guess this is just a little preview.
Mmm. Needs work.
It's alright. Needs work.
One of your synths that come in at 0:07, the one that sounds like a Space Invader laser sound and comes at the beginning of each measure. It's a little weird. And also... it's a little weak and combined with the fact that it's panned off to the left entirely, it's not very good. Kind of annoying after a while. I suppose best to pan it between left and right, and also perhaps play with it a little more.
The beat is alright. It's a bit messy though at some points and feels rather muddy.
The song itself is repetitive... so you may want to add more variation or another theme. Another thing is that you should also work on the mastering. That certainly needs to be played about a bit more.
Keep working at it.
-HFX ^_^
I thank thee for thine constructive and encouraging words. I shall definately make a v2, so I'll take it into consideration. :)
Edit: The panning is to the left and right btw, I don't know what you mean by that. :p
I'll join the crowd....
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OMG UR TEH BEST MAKE MOAR MOAR MOAR FOR MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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-HFX ^_^ <3 <==much love and support
Title fits.
Well... it's repetitive. Need I say more? :P
At least the guitars sound better in this one than the last one.
Keep trying.
-HFX ^_^
Still pretty new to FL Studio, getting better (At least -I- think so) by the day. Keep checking in, I'll be putting new stuff up every now and then. Thanks for the review!
A review for you!
Alright, saw your newest song and decided to take some time to review this song.
Not bad over all. It's rather short, and the long silence at the end is rather... long. :P
The song itself is rather simple, so there's not much I can say about it. It's not a bad tune. It repeats itself, but that's alright.
I guess the only thing that I can also say is that perhaps you need to work with the guitars sound more. They don't sound very good. Play around with the mastering a bit, you might get a better sound. I think an EQ might do some good on this. I'd stick away from the compression unless it's used for limiting.
-HFX ^_^
To be honest, I'm still getting used to all the little things in FL Studio. I'm not even close to figuring out what maybe half of the stuff does. :3 I'm just creating miniature tracks to get a feel for what kindof music I wanna make.
I'll sit and listen to them and pick out things I need to work on.
Thanks for the second review. When I make it big, you can say you knew me when I first got started! :D
Punk rock. Nice. :D
Okay, you probably know this by now... I don't listen to punk rock much. >_>; Hence my dumb reply back there on my newspost. Hahaha.......
So I decided to peep in. Glad I did.
I hear two guitars here, and I like the way they work well together. You have a nice melody from 1:54 to 2:14. I really like that melody bit. Of course the other parts of your song is great too!
Although one thing you were able to get to me, is that punk rock can actually sound better than the 2 minute loud monsters that I've heard back a few years from my friends. I guess it goes to show that there is good and bad in every genre, and you're part of the good. : ) 6 minutes and not a boring moment in your song. Very well done.
Great job! You're really good at this. And so is Switch.
-HFX ^_^
P.S. You know... if I ever have time to get around to it.... this would make a great 6 minute orchestral song. :3 I'll see if I can get around to making a classical remix of this. :P
haha your reply wasn't dumb, I surely call all kind of electronica music "techno" so don't worry about it :D
It's true that punk rock is usually fast, loud and short and I must admit that it's what I mostly like from punk rock but I also like the more varied tracks. For instance my favorite song ever is Nofx - The Decline, it's a 18 minutes punk song, it's awesome, varied, I recommend you check it out. Also you should check out some Bad Religion, they're one of my favorite band, I consider it "smart punk", they're smart people (the singer is a university teacher) and it shows in their lyrics and the music is really good (yet simple), they do amazing backvocals and all. Check out Bad Religion - Tiny voices just as an example :D
Glad you liked the song :D Thanks for the great review.
ps: Ho....ly.....shit...a classical version, that would be amazing! please do it!!! haha if you have time :)
pps: oh and just for the record, I didn't max out the volumes like I normally would. We went with a just middle between loundess and dynamics :)
So far my favorite remix. :D
Thank you for making this remix!
This review is kind of long overdue. :P
But here it is...
You made excellent use of the melodies that were present in the original song. And you also layered them rather well. Another thing I liked was how you kept a fast beat pace to the entire song.
Great job!
-HFX ^_^
Anytime.
Really nice.
I wasn't much a fan of the vocal samples you used there. However the intro certainly did get me hooked onto the song. It's a great song over all.
Well done and good job.
5/5
-HFX ^_^
lol i barely used any vocals at all. thanks anywayzzz. im glad u enjoyed it XD
Hurrah for live recordings!
I'm always a fan of live recordings!
I like the cello. Although I think you could have added a reverb effect to it after you imported it into FL. That and I would've loved to have heard more cello throughout the song. :D
Great job!
-HFX ^_^
Yeah, live recordings are fun and easy.
I might make an orchestral song soon with more live cello in it.
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.
Wonderful!
I heard the original Metropolis song. It's amazing.
Yet I think yours is better than that one. It's more true to the Megaman songs. Or rather the Megaman X songs. I'm a Megaman X fan. :P
I don't typically listen to heavy metal songs, but this is done really really well and it isn't painful at all to listen to.
Great and wonderful job!
-HFX ^_^
P.S. Just wondering... what do you use for your guitars? Because FL Core has nothing that is good for rock guitar sounds.
I use my guitar :D plugged into a Line6 PodXT (a distortion/effect/everything simulator) which is plugged into my computer.
and thanks for compliment, if you ever need some guitar tracks, let me know maybe we can do something about that.
Glad you liked it :)
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