My favorite out of yours so far!
Hahaha! I can definitely hear the techno in it. It could have been made into a techno song certainly, but I think the way it turned out is wonderful! It has good energy and keeps its pace very well. I think the techno backlay for it was very good for the song over all.
A wonderfully done song and I really really loved listening to this one!
This one earned itself a download and you a place on my favorite artists list.
-HFX ^_^
Thank you! I always appreciate a positive review. Lol, I now have four users who have me as one of their favorites... :/. I need to start collecting more fans.
I hear a song.
Improvisation is good. And what you have here is a very good sample of that. Though I think this can be made into a good song. Just take the parts that stand out from improvisation and make those into a song.
Hmm... maybe if I have time, I'll see if I can make a coherent song out of this improvisation you have here. I can definitely hear a song out of it. It's like a block of marble that is half carved into a statue roughly, and all it needs is the right vision and carving to bring it all out.
-HFX ^_^
Yea, that's actually exactly what I was thinking... Right now the song is VERY rough (mostly due to my utter lack of piano skills), but I might make it into an actual charted-out song if inspiration ever hits... Btw, feel free to mess around with this improv. I'd be very interested to hear what you could turn this into.
~Sycross
A wonderful song.
BlazingDragon has deprived me of much to really critique without sounding repetitive. But yes, I would say improve on the things that he noted and the song would be even better than it already is. The only thing I guess I could add is that maybe add a bridge, and also maybe make the ending not so.............. simple?
Great job nonetheless. Keep it up!
-HFX ^_^
Yes, BlazingDragon's reviews are always amazingly helpful. I appreciate your additional comments, though, and I may edit this in the future. Glad you liked it!
~Sycross
Very good except for the vocals.
I really liked this song and the music part of it. The lyrics are very beautiful and the music fits very well.
The only critique I have about this is the vocals. In my honest opinion, it could have been done better. At certain times the microphone seemed to not handle the volume very well. I have that problem too so I understand the frustration.
The other critique I have is with your voice itself. Partially it's the song itself, since the song has such a big range for the melody. That probably made it really hard for you to sing. It sounds as if you strained your voice to sing it. I guess the only way to work around that is to practice singing.
Great job nonetheless. I look forward to more from you.
-HFX ^_^
Thanks! Yea, some parts of this song are definitely a little high for me to sing... and I didnt have much time to record this, so it was kind of rushed... I'm going to try to rerecord it by Friday, but I doubt that's going to happen.
I appreciate your comments.
~Sycross
Really nicely done!
I would have to say indeed that this isn't as sad as I think you may have been aiming for. However it is a good background theme song to say... a devastated battle ground littered with the fallen and a lone warrior standing among them. I guess it isn't so much sad, but it has a melancholic sound to it. A kind of feeling of regret of what had just perspired.
I think it's really well orchestrated. Keep up the good work.
-HFX ^_^
Thanks, glad to see you're reviewing a lot of my songs! I'll try and return the favor when I have time... :P.
OMG DJ NATE IS TEH QUEER! :P
See! You're not quite gay. XD
Though honestly, I don't see where this can go as far as becoming a full song. The bass is rather annoying at times.
But none theless, love all your songs.
Keep up the good work.
And have fun messing around now and then. You'll have everyone loving you... even the guys. :P
-HFX ^_^
OMG WHERES STAMPER WHEN I NEED HIM!314235678
Happy bouncing!
That's what this song makes me think of! Makes me want to bounce up and down rather happily. The loop can actually be improved by removing the last second of silence at the end and it will be perfect.
Wonderful hoppy boppy dance theme!
Great work!
-HFX ^_^
Thanks so much! And trust me I tried to remove it but it WONT GO AWAY. Haha.
Good song!
I actually like the beginning a lot. And then the follow up right afterwards is good. I think now I'll go and listen to the other versions of this song. ^__^
Great job! Keep it up!
And have a wonderful day!
-HFX ^_~
lol I will have a wonderful day lol Thanks for the REVIEW!!!!!!!!
Well... very true to the title.
I was curious, and decided to click the link. And.... it sure did meet my expectations.
-HFX ;>_<; *bloody ears*
lol next time remember curiosity killed the cat! in this case it killed ur ears
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